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You were swimming in the crystal blue water of Lake Constance, Germany. Its waves were gently lapping against your arms. You [h/c] hair was wet and slicked back. The afternoon sun was gently beating down your [s/c] skin. Your [e/c] eyes looked up to a cloudless spectacular blue sky.

“_____ vhat are you doing?”

You turned around to see your long-time boyfriend walking towards you from the beach. You smiled and admired how his eyes exactly matched the sky.

“Ludwig, I was only looking at the sky. Plus, you should come join me, the water feels nice~”

Ludwig looked you and then the sun. You saw he was growing a bit uncomfortable from the heat by seeing his flawless white skin turned pink.

“Fine, liebe. I vill join you”

You grinned as he joined you in the waist deep water. You could tell that the cool water relieved some of the heat he felt from the sun.

“It’s nice isn’t it? The lake, the weather, and this secluded spot..”

“Ja. It ist nice” He turned to you and gave one of those rare smiles that only you can bring out.

You reached out and hugged his strong waist. You looked up, leaned forward, and softly kissed his perfect pink lips.

Even though you guys went out for months, it still shocked him how affectionate you were towards him considering his stern nature. He loved how you could always manage to make him smile whether he is angry or sad. He was always happy when you were there to comfort him when Feli was annoying the crap out of him.

The day he met you was honestly one of the best days of his life. He would remember you in your pretty [f/c] dress and the way you acted so gracefully when you talked to Feli. Your pretty [h/c] locks falling against your beautiful body. And when he finally known you long enough, he confessed his love for you. You joyfully returned his, and once you became his girlfriend that was another best day for him. But today, he will make it the BEST of the BEST days of his life… by asking you to marry him.

He gladly kissed you back with more passion and vigor than you did. You grinned against his lips as you licked his bottom lip. He wanted to tease you so he kept his mouth closed. You obviously not liking that you were not getting your way, grinded against him with your blue bikini bottom with his German-flagged swim trunks. Ludwig knowing your tricks smirked against you mouth, and detached his mouth only for it to be placed near your ear. He said, “Schatz, did you forget that I am zhe one that ist in control?”

You being the rebellious one said, “Oh yeah? Are you sure about that?”

Ludwig, ready for the challenge, gave you a lustful smile before he answered, “Oh ja”

He brought you closer to him. You gave him a look that read, ‘That’s it? Really’

But the German man was not to be messed with.

He stealthily snaked one arm around your waist while the other hand squeezed your butt. You gave a surprised squeak and while your mouth was open, Ludwig took it as the perfect opportunity to thrust his tongue into your open mouth.

Tongues twisted and fought in order to see who the dominant one was. Ludwig, to ensure his victory, took the hand that was on your butt and rubbed your left breast through your blue bikini top.  As you moaned, Ludwig quickly wrestled and sucked on your tongue, allowing him to be the winner.

Against his mouth, you mumbled, “Y-you c-cheated”

In response, Ludwig tilted your head, and further deepened the kiss. Once you were thoroughly dizzy from that intense make out session, Ludwig pulled away and said, “All ist fair in love and var”

He pulled back even further and you, still dizzy, looked at him questioningly.

Ludwig was the type of person who found it hard to tell his feelings especially to the one he loved; but he knew that the time to propose was now or never.

He reached down into the pocket of his swim trunks and took out a sealed black box. You looked down and thought, ‘Is he going to-?!’

He kneeled down as far as he could into the water and asked, “_-____, I just vanted to a-sk.. I-If you could…” His face turned a full shade of scarlet that you knew wasn’t from the sun. “Vould you become meine liebe Frau?” He hurriedly said.

You knowing a bit of German, understood what he said and gave a huge smile. “Of course! Ludwig I would love to be your frau!”

The German man gave the biggest smile you have ever seen. He grabbed you and swung you around in a circle and kissed you. Once he placed you down, he opened the box and took the princess cut diamond ring out and placed it to your ring finger. You watched teary eyed, “I love you Ludwig”

“Ich Liebe Dich auch ____” and put his forehead to yours while looking into your [e/c] eyes.

“So fiancé…. Since we are here alone… in this secluded spot…. Shall we consummate our union early~?”

Ludwig immediately picked you up bridal style and headed to the beach. “It vould be my pleasure~~~”
WARNING: Contains a hint of LEMON-NESS! Don’t like, don’t read!

This is a oneshot but if you want more, request! :)
Also, since I don't know German; I used google translate. >.< Tell me if I made any grammatical errors.


:iconcassylovespink: :iconsaysplz: So I decided to write about Hetalia. I can’t help it! Ludwig be in my head! :iconsexygermanyplz:

:icongermanyplz: :iconsaysplz: V-Vhat?! :icongermanicdespairplz:

:iconcassylovespink: :iconsaysplz: You didn’t hear that! Now read what I own!

:icongermanyplz: :iconsaysplz: *Gives death stare to me then turns to audience* Cassylovespink only owns the storyline.
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Superdaughter2 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
*cleaning my glasses* ahem... thank you!!!! i love this but please with all pink goodness candies and cherry blossom trees write more of this series xD Heart - Free Heart - Free Pink love III Blush Gift: Pink Flame clapping icon Thankies Pink Kitty Paw Print (Dark Pink) - F2U! 
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WolfieTheNinjaWolf Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
*Throws pink sparkles*
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DestinyMace Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
I am sorry but this sentence makes no sense for me:
Vould you become Maine liebe Frau?
(My love special)
There should either be a comma or edit it how you please.
But it was great other than that!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good job!!!!!!!!
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QueenOfTomboy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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Obsessed-Otaku Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015
i dont love u fourever. i love u 5ever.
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:iconkaloomte-cassy:
Kaloomte-Cassy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
Hun though I sometimes like tagging these are the ones that make me sad. Please don't put hurtful things on here. 

Tagging should be for fun not to make someone scared :/
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QueenOfTomboy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Alrighty. Sorry bout that.
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:iconkaloomte-cassy:
Kaloomte-Cassy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
Its okay. :)
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:iconqueenoftomboy:
QueenOfTomboy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm just thankful you were nice about it. CX
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:iconkaloomte-cassy:
Kaloomte-Cassy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
I try to be as courteous as possible. I didn't angry because there is nothing to be angry about c:
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:iconqueenoftomboy:
QueenOfTomboy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! You are so nice! People on DA are nicer than people in RL.
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:iconkaloomte-cassy:
Kaloomte-Cassy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
You are welcome! and thanks :) 

Sadly I think that is kind of true...though there are a lot of bullies here too. Believe me I know =_=
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OtakuMaster01 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
What if I told you... *pushing my glasses up/ fixing* ...This was the best fan-fic I have ever read~~~~!!!!
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KittyKirkland Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^/////^ :iconsexygermanyplz: I love it!!~
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KokoaEnoshima Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
Me rikey :>
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DownShiftPlus Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh.
*explodes into rainbows, unicorns,sparkles, and PASTA~!*
WHEW. K...I'm good now.
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amber1700 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*attempts to stop nose from gushing blood*

Ah, ok...
Everything is awesome here, apart from the title stumps me a little (I've only been learning German for about two and a half years now, so I'm no expert)

But, by my intelligence, it reads precisely:

'My Love', and as I'm taught, Frau would refer to a woman who is married, or is of a certain maturity (I'm told there's a certain age when you refrain on calling her fräulein, which is Miss, if I'm correct) 

So, speaking literally, yeah, it says 'My love woman',
which doesn't make a heap of sence (I know about the literal translations with German; it doesn't often work. Bear in mind, I've not used a translator for this example; the tend to be incorrect. *COUGH, MORGAN FREEMAN VOICE* For an example, Ich Fußball gespielt, would literally be 'I football Played', but we'd say, obviously,  I played football) but this doesn't work...Upon any of my German logic.

Bearing in mind, I was taught ONLY the language, I learned next to nothing about culture and much less terms for loving someone, so it may be a traditional German vow, or something like that.
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amber14703 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
our names.....
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:iconamber1700:
amber1700 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Amber is such a wonderful name, isn't it? XD
I want to change my username though. To Radioactive Synesthesia. Too bad I was 11 when I made my DA XDD
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amber14703 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
XD I want to change mine to Unknown Usagi (if it's available) or Unknown rebelion
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nerdygamer7896 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
i'm german,but born in america and living there.
i know a bit of the language,but you are correct.
i know about the culture.my parents say i speak good german
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muuu1234 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
...
*falls down stairs*
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DemonicXChemikalz Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconpervplz: AHHHKK I LOVE THISSS~ :heart:
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:iconpoetry-venting:
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Me: well too bad! I'm on my period!
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PrettyLittleZADRLove Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Student Writer
See, this is why we need a favorite button for comments! 

You have won this: :iconfreevitalregionsplz:
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:iconpoetry-venting:
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
*takes coupon to btt* heheheheheheheehehehehe
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:iconprettylittlezadrlove:
PrettyLittleZADRLove Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Writer
Oh lord, I've created a monster....
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:iconpoetry-venting:
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
*screams* GIVE ME YOUR VITAL REGIONS!
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:iconprettylittlezadrlove:
PrettyLittleZADRLove Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Student Writer
APH England: Scared :NOOOOOOOOOOO
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:iconpoetry-venting:
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
*shifts into attack and steals all vital regions at once* *runs away covering myself with a blanket*
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:iconprettylittlezadrlove:
PrettyLittleZADRLove Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Student Writer
*Everyone screams, especially Germany. Germany screams like a girl.*
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Wolverina22 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student Writer
Can't wait to see what Germany's gonna do....Hetalia Spinning France Ohon honhon hon Icon 
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:icongermanybabeex33:
germanybabeex33 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Student Writer
Chibi Holy Roman Empire-01 (Worried) [V5] 
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chibi-germany7 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Vaht I kill jou vita fire
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:iconkatearchan:
katearchan Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
I hope this is a no killing zone~
DON'T SHOOT ME PLZ!!!!!Tomoyo Sakagami (Crying) [V3] 
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:iconchibi-germany7:
chibi-germany7 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't worry your fine :)
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:iconkatearchan:
katearchan Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
Yay!~
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:iconchibi-germany7:
chibi-germany7 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Woohoo!
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:iconnikokarma:
NikoKarma Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
She shall be my love girl?
(This is how the name of this looks to me.)
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:iconponyxyz:
ponyxyz Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Technically it means miss, Mädchen means girl. But it's cool dat u kno that much German. ^U^
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:iconnikokarma:
NikoKarma Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
•.• my sis lives there so I have to learn it to speak with her
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Makeshift-prime Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Student Artist
It translates to she shall be my dear wife. I looked it up because I thought it said my love miss........ 
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NikoKarma Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The literal words are 'leibe' and 'frau' love, and girl.
I literaly just got out of my german class, and frauline was considered provocative and feminist to be said to a watress so they call them what they call male wators. Frau meaning girl.
And ich leibe dich, is I love you. Connect the dots.
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Makeshift-prime Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Artist
I'm not so good at Germany...... And I took it for a GCSE..............  And I remember calling my german teacher Frau ...... I tired 
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NikoKarma Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
S-okay~ german is a hard language to learn....
I just... lived there a while?
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Wafflepigs Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
When It said he got the box out of his swim trunks I stopped, facepalmed and said "why just why why would you do that? Is it waterproof? You just ruined it man why would you? WHYYYYYYYYY!?
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CrystalCritic Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I hope that shit was waterproof BIETCH!
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:iconwafflepigs:
Wafflepigs Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014
Hey Germany that was waterproof right?
Germany; SHEIT
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CrystalCritic Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
(Eye twitches) . . . . Run. (Takes out a gun)
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:iconwafflepigs:
Wafflepigs Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014
Holy fakin SHIAT RUUUUN
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